A Hundred Word Stories #38

February 18th, 2010 § 2

Détective Noir by Ryan Licata

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From his ninth storey window the city lights, on and off, created a mosaic against the night. He swigged neat whiskey from a tumbler, staring in at all those well-lit apartments. In rooms and kitchens, against curtains drawn, he could see the cut-out silhouettes of people having their parties. Women, their necks thrown back, mouths agape, laughing their heads off; and men, hanging up their dinner jackets, loosening their neckties, smoking short-cropped cigars. He smoked one himself, raised his drink. Let them have their fun with the lights on, for later, in the dark, he knew it would be murder.

Notes

This is the first Detective Noir story by Ryan Licata, the first one he wrote, (I had published the second one, Detective Noir et la Chatte, already some time ago here). It was his idea that the detective should looks somehow like me. I will do the whole bunch in the next weeks, they make up a nice little series inside his hundred word stories.

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2 Responses to “A Hundred Word Stories #38”

  • ryan says:

    drink, drink to the lees!

  • Walter Licata says:

    Good story with many alternative possibilities. ‘murder’ through disagreement from what has been or what could be as a result of human interaction? Where will it lead? Awaiting the next twist along the pathway through the maze that is life!

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